10/24/12
Isla's Story:
I was sailing on a raft and the sea was glittering white and I lay my head on my pillow. I could hear waves going by, and the sea is swishing with darkness. And, when I see the dolphins swim I jump in the water and swim and swim. And I saw everything that was in the sea, like sea turtles and everything. So, I did what most people do; go to soccer after I finished the boat ride. As the stars sparkled and the moon gleamed, I sat there and looked at the sky. I loved the view, but then it was time for bed. I look at the moon while I lay in bed. The moon looked like a slice of golden apple. Then I fell asleep, but not until the morning. And, I woke up three days later. I slept for so long because I stayed up all night with the stars and the golden moon. When I woke up, my hair was purple and my eyes were light blue. My hair glittered in the sunlight, I loved the sunlight more than anything. The golden sun came from the golden moon, it was sewed with golden buttons. I held the golden apple in my hand and was so happy. It was a piece of moon, and my eyes twinkled as the sun went down. My eyes were silver then, like mirrors.
The end.
Wow.
Holy Crapola - keep her writing!!!
ReplyDeleteOMG...she is amazing...Contact the book companies now and get a contract going! Her imagination is still pure and there are no boundaries. I love it, and even if you don't get a book company involved, I would buy copy from you so that I can read these to my kids. It's so rad!
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